Tick tock, tick tock,
The hands seem to never move.
Making us wait.
Longer and longer.
The minutes seem like hours.
The days seem like years.
And when the time arrives,
It goes by too fast.
It's done.
The days seem like years.
And when the time arrives,
It goes by too fast.
It's done.
This use of the closed form is certainly appropriate to the topic of the poem. If you are working on word choice, I am wondering a little where that is specifically happening. If you like these forms of poetry, a good step would be to read some of those types of poems by published poets.
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